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GRE作文常见的逻辑框架错误(三)

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逻辑思维既是一种能力,也是一种规范。我们常说的“这篇文章没有逻辑“,除了本身的逻辑漏洞外,还有就是逻辑呈现的形式是不正确的。这篇文章就从具体案例出发。今天天道培训小编就给大家介绍下GRE作文常见的逻辑框架错误(三)。

关键词: GREGRE作文逻辑框架错误

  逻辑思维既是一种能力,也是一种规范。我们常说的“这篇文章没有逻辑“,除了本身的逻辑漏洞外,还有就是逻辑呈现的形式是不正确的。这篇文章就从具体案例出发。今天天道培训小编就给大家介绍下GRE作文常见的逻辑框架错误(三)。

  问题三:缺乏支撑的细节

  仅仅有合适的例证是不够的,我们还需要在文章中提供足够的细节来解释例子如何支持观点。比如某同学写的issue 65 (Every individual in a society has aresponsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws)的其中一个中间段:

  There will surely be concerns about the consequences of implementingunjust laws and forcing people to obey them. To address such concerns, thereshould be ways through which people can express their disagreement within thelegal framework. For example, laws once gave people different rights based ontheir race or gender, which was totally unjust. Martin Luther King Jr. and hisfollowers chose to express their disagreement in a peaceful way, to call forattention on the inequity and urge the improvements of laws. Similarly, withlegal pretests feminists expressed their requirements on equal pay, equalrights of vote and other social rights. In such ways, unjust laws would beabolished and replaced by just laws, without driving the whole society intochaos.

  这里主题句里提到了consequences,但是后面的讨论中并没有具体指出是什么后果。例子中提到的laws once gave people different rights based on their race or gender, which was totally unjust这句话显得比较笼统,可能加上 in the US这个限定词会更好一些。总的来说这段写的不算太差,相信还有很多同学在写中间段的时候都面临没有很好地解释例证的问题。

  再比如说某同学写的issue 78 (People'sattitudes are determined more by their immediate situation or surroundings thanby society as a whole)

  As children begin to study in schools, they have more opportunities tointeract with the society but are still limited by their families, resulting inthe society and their immediate surroundings to equally impact their attitudes.On the one hand, as students, children can meet plenty of schoolmates and canuse the Internet to get more information from the society. For instance, theymay start to watch TV episodes and discuss with their peers. In this case, theywill form their own attitude towards fashion. On the other hand, they are stillconstraint by their families as long as they live with their family members. Aserious parent may not allow their kids to use drugs, or they may even taketheir kids to a higher-quality institute simply to avoid their kids to contactwith any drug.

  注意这句话讲的是电视剧影响了孩子们对时尚的态度。这本来是个很好的point,如果能接着写一些更具体的解释就更好了。可惜作者接下来就讲另一个point了。

  以上是关于GRE作文常见的逻辑框架错误(三)的详细内容,希望大家能从中受益,不断改进自己的备考方法提升备考效率,从而获得满意的成绩。更多GRE备考信息请登录天道培训GRE考试网站咨询,祝大家都能早日梦圆名校。

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