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5条提升GRE写作词句水平的高分建议

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GRE作文想要冲刺高分,考生在遣词造句上就绝对不能马虎。许多考生都存在用词重复,句式单一等问题,这也导致了大家作文成绩难以提升到4分以上的高分水准。针对这个问题,本文将给出5条提升GRE写作词句水平的高分建议。

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  GRE作文想要冲刺高分,考生在遣词造句上就绝对不能马虎。许多考生都存在用词重复,句式单一等问题,这也导致了大家作文成绩难以提升到4分以上的高分水准。针对这个问题,本文将给出5条提升GRE写作词句水平的高分建议。

  一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词

  1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如:

  原文:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab.

  改写:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语)Or: The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语)

  2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如:

  1) 原文:The team members are good players.

  改写:The team members play well.

  2) 原文:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness.

  改写:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness.

  3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如:

  1) 原文:There is no opportunity for promotion.

  改写:No opportunity for promotion exists.

  2) 原文:Here are the books you ordered.

  改写:The books you ordered have arrived.

  二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了

  例如:

  1、原文:My supervisor went past my desk.

  改写:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.

  2、原文:She is a careful shopper.

  改写:She compares prices and quality.

  三、尽量运用主动语态

  例如:

  1、原文:The organization has been supported by charity.

  改写:Charity has supported the organization.

  2、原文:The biscuits were stacked on a plate.

  改写:Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.

  四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语

  例如:

  1、原文:My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.

  改写:My little sister prefers chocolate milk.

  2、原文:We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.

  改写:We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.

  3、原文:We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  改写:We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.

  4、原文:My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.

  改写:My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.

  五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语

  例如:

  1、原文:They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.

  改写:They will not agree to any of his proposals.

  2、原文:I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.

  改写:I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.

  以上就是关于GRE写作中如何通过一些遣词造句的小技巧提升GRE作文水平的内容介绍,结合实例进行讲解,相信会对大家的写作提分有所帮助。

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